I have been thinking about this assignment for a few days After read through the assignment and the I poem books I really think that this is going to be a very beneficial activity for my students. I am going to focus my project on the Revolutionary War and can not wait for the kids to start on this project. Some of them have already learned about I poetry in their language arts class, so this won’t be new to some of them. I really think that they are going to really immerse themselves in their poems and in their topic. I hope that they feel like they are the character, event, or location that they research. After seeing some examples, I can’t wait to see how much the poetry project aspect will enhance their understanding of the content I will be teaching to them. I envision seeing their poems as a collection, telling the story of the Revolutionary War.
Here is my attempt at an I Poem
Valley Forge
I am cold and harsh
I wonder how long the soldiers will last
I hear the despair in their voices
I see the calloused feet and tattered clothing
I want to provide a place for shelter and safe harbor
I am cold and harsh
I pretend to not notice the shivering and lack of supplies
I feel responsible for their misery
I touch the fingers of their glowing campfire
I worry there will not be enough logs for cabins
I cry as the men toil to build their shelter
I am cold and harsh
I understand this will only make the soldiers stronger
I say there is no gain without pain
I dream about warm summer days of freedom
I try to protect the men from sickness and disease
I hope their struggle will prove worthwhile
I am cold and harsh
References
Freedman, R. (2009). Washington at Valley Forge.
Stein, C. R. (1994). Valley Forge.